200 years after the defeat of Fire Lord Ozai, the Water Avatar has come and gone, now the newest Avatar an Earth Bender has gone missing. A war has begun and the search for peace is underway.
 
HomeCalendarFAQSearchMemberlistUsergroupsRegisterLog in
Be sure to read the rules!

Share | 
 

 Kaluo Shen- Airbender

Go down 
AuthorMessage
Xan



Posts : 6
Join date : 2010-08-02

PostSubject: Kaluo Shen- Airbender    Tue Aug 03, 2010 4:47 pm

Name: Kaluo Shen (Kal)

Age: 20

Origin: Air Nomad

Picture: Here's a link
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/178/7/d/Tensa_Zangetsu_by_Gray_Fullbuster.png

Lineage: Kal is a decsendant of Avatar Aang and Waterbender Master Katara. Grandson of Tenzin.

Biography: As a decsendant of the Avatar, the people of the renewed Air Nomads thought highly of Kal's skills. However, Kal did not agree with the Air Nomads dislike for finishing moves. He felt that it was necessary to be able to have them in case they have no choice, for he knew from history that they would have had a chance against the firebenders if they used at least some killing potential.

Though none of the other Air Nomads agreed with Kal, he still continued his teachings. He also travelled to several places where his great grandfather had met powerful non-benders and learned several arts of the sword. He combines this with his airbending with deadly efficiency. He also created his own airbending moves by utilizing his great grandfather's air scooter technique and some other techniques as well.

Now Kal lives amongst the Air Nomads, but he comes and goes as he pleases, trying to learn new things and see new places. Like his great grandfather, his grandfather and his father before him, Kal travels with his own Lemur and Sky Bison, Sopa and Long.

Abilities: Air Blade - By focusing wind around his sword, Kal can extend the reach of his blade, allowing him to cut past the boundaries of his sword, it also increases it's cutting power.

Wind Beam - By pulling wind into a single spot, Kal can create a ball of energy, which splits apart into seven beams towards an opponent. Though it is created using wind, it is as hot as fire and moves like water when it forms. A sort of liquid lightning in a sense. The technique becomes more lethal the more wind is focused.

Maelstrom Orb - Utilizing the idea of the Air Scooter into a more offensive technique, Kal creates a ball of many moving winds, condensed into a small orb the size of a playing ball. It is held within the hand and it grinds into whatever it comes into contact with. He can also make the orb explode upon impact, causing even more damage.

Personality: Like all Air Nomads, Kal is a pacifist, he doesn't like to get into fights. However, unlike others, he is willing to utilize fatal moves in order to defend himself. He is a free spirit and doesn't usually get angry, but he is like the wind. He is calm and playful, but he were to get angry, he would be a force to be reckoned with.

Weapons: A katana made out of the same meteorite metal that was used for Sokka's blade. It is black in color.


Last edited by Xan on Thu Aug 12, 2010 3:06 pm; edited 4 times in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile
IsACult
Admin
avatar

Posts : 77
Join date : 2010-08-01

PostSubject: Re: Kaluo Shen- Airbender    Tue Aug 03, 2010 4:51 pm

You can add 'Grandson of Tenzin' under lineage, and what do you mean by air sword because the air sword in Avatar the last airbender was just a handle and you had to airbend the blade part.
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://avatar.editboard.com
Xan



Posts : 6
Join date : 2010-08-02

PostSubject: Re: Kaluo Shen- Airbender    Sun Aug 08, 2010 6:16 pm

done
Back to top Go down
View user profile
VivaLaCult

avatar

Posts : 134
Join date : 2010-08-01

PostSubject: Re: Kaluo Shen- Airbender    Sun Aug 08, 2010 6:26 pm

Wind beam and Invisible air don't make any sense to me, you described them as though this character was a fire bender and a light bender, to my knowledge air cannot bend light, but if you explain better I might better understand what you are saying.

Other that it looks great.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Xan



Posts : 6
Join date : 2010-08-02

PostSubject: Re: Kaluo Shen- Airbender    Wed Aug 11, 2010 5:14 pm

Invisible Air - It takes the idea of things like air shield, air spout and other things like that, but having a closely nit layer around the body, the space between the air allows little light through because it takes in water vapor to reflect and channel the light, it is like cloud bending.

Wind Beam - It takes the idea of wind friction to create electricity, however, instead of having wind form around each other it makes the wind focus into a single point, putting together to make Plasma, it takes long to do than lightning bending but it is more powerful.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
unrealistic.entity
Miss Rage Face
avatar

Posts : 39
Join date : 2010-08-06
Age : 25
Location : Atlantis

PostSubject: Re: Kaluo Shen- Airbender    Wed Aug 11, 2010 5:29 pm

Hmn.. Seems agreeable. If no one complains, then you're approved. :]
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://loserfacerochelle.deviantart.com
VivaLaCult

avatar

Posts : 134
Join date : 2010-08-01

PostSubject: Re: Kaluo Shen- Airbender    Wed Aug 11, 2010 6:02 pm

No for these reasons, cloud bending is water bending and if little light got in it would look like a ball of dark shadow, and adding that to air bending essentially gives them another secondary bend, which can't happen.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
unrealistic.entity
Miss Rage Face
avatar

Posts : 39
Join date : 2010-08-06
Age : 25
Location : Atlantis

PostSubject: Re: Kaluo Shen- Airbender    Wed Aug 11, 2010 7:45 pm

Awww.. but that was a cool move. Just save it for a water bending character, Xan. :]

You have too many signature abilities anyway. >>; Loolz.
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://loserfacerochelle.deviantart.com
Xan



Posts : 6
Join date : 2010-08-02

PostSubject: Re: Kaluo Shen- Airbender    Thu Aug 12, 2010 3:07 pm

I got rid of Invisible Air, and I'm done editing, unless I have to get rid of Wind Beam as well
Back to top Go down
View user profile
VivaLaCult

avatar

Posts : 134
Join date : 2010-08-01

PostSubject: Re: Kaluo Shen- Airbender    Thu Aug 12, 2010 3:17 pm

I had more problems with Wind Beam you can keep the other if you want.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
unrealistic.entity
Miss Rage Face
avatar

Posts : 39
Join date : 2010-08-06
Age : 25
Location : Atlantis

PostSubject: Re: Kaluo Shen- Airbender    Thu Aug 12, 2010 3:20 pm

Approved! <3
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://loserfacerochelle.deviantart.com
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: Kaluo Shen- Airbender    

Back to top Go down
 
Kaluo Shen- Airbender
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Can't Hold Us (jcink | au avatar the last airbender rp)
» Zaka Bosu (App)
» A New Mission: Infiltrating the City
» Renji Saito
» Mei and Suzune Tsukiri (Completed)

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Avatar: The Lost Body :: Applications :: Character Applications :: Approved Air Nomad Characters-
Jump to: